SQUEAL!!

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I have to share this comment I received on Mercenaries and Angels!

SPOILER ALERT for those who've not read M&A (Fair warning)

"I've finished the book now, and I thought it was a really good read. I particularly liked the ending - the way you played with expectations and had Max accept what had happened to David, while Angelina found she couldn't handle it. It was surprising, while at the same time it made sense - and it came across as a lot more realistic than a happy 'walking off into the sunset' ending.

I also liked that you let on that Tigershark was David fairly early into the story, instead of having some big revelation at the end. It was more original this way and it gave more time to explore what felt to me to be the real heart of the story - how the two of them reacted to what had happened, and what it meant to them and the people around them. While still having all the exciting running about stuff, of course."

EEE!!! I'm so excited a new reader found this story so engaging!  *Dances*


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